Submission Package Review
The submission process to literary agents is an exhausting and frustrating one. I have been through it myself hundreds of times. I cringe when I look back on my very first queries...then I learned how to write a professional query and I started getting requests for full manuscripts.
Agents are very busy people and they are looking for any small reason to auto-reject your submission. Obviously, I cannot guarantee that I can get you an agent as so much has to align; whether the manuscript itself appeals to the agent's subjective taste, whether they have a full list, etc, but I can help you craft a query that will give them less reason to auto-reject you.
The synopsis is also a difficult piece of writing to master, but once you have mastered their rather strange style, they can actually be enjoyable to craft. I will take a look at your query letter and synopsis and suggest ways to improve it. I will also line-edit your first three chapters, as those need to immediately grab the agent's attention from the very first paragraph, to avoid one of those pesky auto-rejections!
**I do not have any experience with picture books so, unfortunately, cannot help with those!**
£150